Reviews: Testing for Differences in Gaussian Graphical Models: Applications to Brain Connectivity

Neural Information Processing Systems 

The goal of improving testing for differences between graphs is clearly relevant to neuroimaging and other application domains. While the specifics are somewhat incremental, I think this is a great idea, and reasonably well executed. Major issues: * Please explain specifically which gradients are used to get from (4) to (5). This derivation seems incorrect if one takes separate derivatives with respect to \beta_1 and \beta_2. How do you end up with a sum of terms (and not two separate terms)?