Reviews: A state-space model of cross-region dynamic connectivity in MEG/EEG

Neural Information Processing Systems 

The Introduction is generally very good (with minor exceptions described below). Comparison to other models is required. Only one alternative approach is compared to the suggested method and another one-step model (DCM) is not lawfully described. I suggest the authors discuss other applications beside EEG/MEG as many of the alternative approaches were shown to be useful to many modalities. Please introduce consistent spacing before citations (in many cases the space doe not exist at all).