Reviews: Fine-grained Optimization of Deep Neural Networks

It is difficult to parse when new notation is introduced right before it is used or not at all - Subsections in section 3 e.g., -- "In order to ..." should be a new section -- The 2 results should be listed as sub-headings -- How these results are incorporated into algorithm should be listed immediately after Section 4: - Compress table 1 & 2 captions - Notation to be described separately and not merged in bullets - Derivation of Lines 5,6,7 should be explained in greater detail